the first half has very good poems, raw and strong images, but it somehow dilutes into the end where all the other poems are very similar.
I understand the feeling in them, but at the same time I can imagine being put into a big long poem with different scenes instead of many things about the same.
Again: the first few poems, great stuff. I'll definitely reread them for sure.
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カイドウ、オロチの支配から20年…。辛い時を過ごしてきたワノ国を解放し、皆の笑顔を取り戻せるのか!? ルフィの拳に全てが懸かる!! ワノ国編、超絶最高潮!! “ひとつなぎの大秘宝”を巡る海洋冒険ロマン!!
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7/5
1050 broke me as no other One Piece chapter has.
This is truly one of the great works I have ever read.
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大看板2人をサンジとゾロが倒した頃、ルフィとカイドウの戦いが激化!! 一方マムと対峙するキッド＆ローは極限バトルを展開中。君臨する四皇2人を倒せるのか!? “ひとつなぎの大秘宝”を巡る海洋冒険ロマン!!
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6/5
Peak piece.
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